A.) A Personal Experience
My Busy Time
I was so busy because I followed some extracurricular and organization activities in my Senior High School (Topic Sentence). First, I dedicated myself in OSIS (MASS1). In that organization, I wasted much time because I was a leader in there (MISS 1). There were some events that had to be held every month or every year (MISS 1). Every Saturday, I held a meeting with my members to discuss un coming events (MISS 1). The second organization was Scout (MASS 2). Activities in Scout not only indoor but also outdoor (MISS 2). For example, if I pursued a degree in Scout, I had to follow camping outside of my school (MISS 2). It could be draining my energy and my time (MISS 2). Paskibraka was the next organization (MASS 3). Every year, I and force of Paskibraka always followed a prestigious race (MISS 3). We needed to exercise every Wednesday and Saturday to obtain a compact motion (MISS 3). Beside I participated in some organization, I still followed some extracurricular (MASS 4). I choseKIR (Scientific Work Teen) (MISS 4). I joined it because I was a science student (MISS 4). I wanted to make my self more understand with its subject (MISS 4). The other was KIR English Language (MASS 5). Although I was not a language student at my school, but I like English language so I chose to join with that extracurricular (MISS 5). The last extracurricular that I followed was KIR French (MASS 6). This was foreign language that I had ever not learned, so made me curious to study it (MISS 6). In short, I followed academic learning but I can still manage my time to contribute in some organization and extracurricular at my school (Conclusion Sentence).
B. Example
The Useful Music
Listening to music can make us feel better (Topic Sentence). Music can improve our mood (MASS 1). When we are alone and feel bored, we can play music to restore mood, so we don't feel alone again (MISS 1). People also use music to unify rhythm and movement in sport (MASS 2). For example in aerobic exercise (MISS 2). Using music in aerobic exercise can make people who do become more enthusiastic (MISS 2). Stress relievers also be made one of the reasons why people listen to music (MASS 3). Piles of job and some activities make us stress quickly (MISS 3). Next, music also can be used to increase the concentration of learning (MASS 4). Sometimes some people will be more receptive to learn something when in a relaxed state with listening to music (MISS 4). Listening to music that has lyric, it can be a motivation (MASS 5). An example is song from Westlife (You Rise Me Up) or the other song from Demi Lovato (Skyscraper) (MISS 5). From lyric that they have, we can get learning and can applicate in our life (MISS 5). Those example show that listening to music is a good choice when we are feeling bad with ourselves (Conclusion Sentence).
C.) Fact
The Devil Thing Called Drug
Many factors that cause people use drug (Topic Sentence). Feeling curious is reason that usually be used by users of drug (MASS 1). Something new can make us want to know more until trying to give it a try (MISS 1). It is not surprisingly if people use it (MISS 1). Besides feeling curious, just for fun is the other factor (MASS 2). The beginning reason before using drug is just for fun, but after we have tried little by little, it can be addicted thing that very hard to be break (MISS 2). Next, people use drug because to follow fashionable (MASS 3). An example is if people join with a gang that all of the members use drug, automatically its followers use drug too (MISS 3). It is impossible if there is person in their gang who don't follow the fashion of that group (MISS 3). It happens because someone can be accepted in a gang, they have to do the same habit (MISS 3). Moreover, escaping for a problem is the other reason (MASS 4). Sometimes when people are getting a case, they get confuse where they will lean on (MISS 4). Usually people will fall in to negative thing if we don't have strong creed (MISS 4). The last factor is we are not brave to say "No" when there is our friend who ask to do negative things especially using drug (MASS 5). We have to say "No" resolutely (MISS 5). Don't be influenced easily with someone's asking (MISS 5). There can be no doubt that we have to leave drug because it is very dangerous thing for our life (Conclusion Sentence).
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